We’re a team. Help out your peers. Correct the following sentences.

1. Washington state provided a subsidy of more than $2,000 for in-state students.

2. “The $13.5 million is the tip of a larger iceberg,” Coordinator of Arts and Culture Jerry McCollum said.

3. “What I know is the system is broken right now," Floyd said. "We can’t live in a world with 14 percent tuition increases,”

4. The co-presidents announced a club to meet more people interested in hiking.

5. “There are still new things to say with art music," Williams said.  "Its hard to stop and listen, but when you do it can be an extremely pleasant surprise.”

6. In September 2010, the wine-tasting endorsement will be available to stores, according to Jane Westman, culinary coordinator for metropolitan market.

7. He died of a heart attack in September 1996.

8. The club has its own audio engineer.

9. When the cannon blasted off, the shock of excitement from the noise added to the emotion of the game.


Shorten the following sentences.
1. Sleep often becomes less of a priority for many students.
2. A new workout routine is sweeping the country.
Does this need attribution?
1. When somebody is told not to do something they are going to want to do it even more. yes
2. When finals week approaches for college students around the country, one word can be heard from the Pacific Ocean to the Atlantic: Adderall. yes
3. Organized crime has nearly all control over unions and the concrete industry in New York. yes
4. This new trend is taking hold in many areas across the nation, especially high population areas and college campuses. yes
5. Students do not stop to think of the consequences that might occur after a night of drinking. yes